Alright, so what we've got here is some choice project-ing that needs to be finished, but in the typical Alexa fashion, weenie feelings are holding it back. I think I'm definitely gonna use a brush to add some depth to the face, but I guess my two major questions are:
- How can I make the text pop? It's kind of lost in the ether right now.
- Should I bring the red over "poetry" into the eye and mouth drippings?
I would just leave the red over "poetry" as your only red..it's kind of a cool little random pop of color. In terms of the lettering I would consider using pen and ink or just go back over it in pencil a few times. Make sure also to spend a significant time developing the values in your person..and perhaps push the background darker eventually with some purples or dark blues. Don't be a weenie! Go for it!!!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely try to push some areas darker to bring out the lighter areas. Right now it feels like the same value as a whole.
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