Saturday, October 11, 2014

Renee Ciardullo's Taber Project

Hey guys! What do you think? Is it too dark? Should I add anything to the ground(the circle texture on the bottom) or the sky(bubble wrap texture on top)? Any other ideas? Thanks!

4 comments:

  1. I love this Renee! I think that it looks good as is!

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  2. What if you took a lighter or a blow dryer and tried to make a little more those marble-like abstractions like the artist you focused on for this. I really like the roots! I definitely think they tie the piece together a lot.

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  3. The darkness behind the plants really adds great definition. I think it's not too dark at all :)

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  4. Hey Renee! I agree with Claudia i do think your foreground could use some work..i would think about how to get it to stand out more from the background. Could you for example introduce another color in either the front or back to differentiate them a bit more?

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