Monday, October 26, 2015

Alexa's Journal

Ignore my inability to take a panorama and take a gander here at this book. 

My journal experience basically covers my various fears-- some big ones. Aging, the phone, small spaces, blindness, feeling trapped, and dying.

I feel like a need the most help with the blindness page. How can I make it look less empty? Also-- On the last page, the death page, how can I make it seem more ominous?


3 comments:

  1. You could push darker values around each facet of the blindess page, especially the box and the figure, to push them out and make it feel less empty. Really awesome journal.

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  2. I love the constant reds. You could push the black is some of your Pages

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  3. For the death page you could try adding a person in mourn, or a funeral precession, or a church in the back ground with crows. Just show the fact that with death comes sadness grief and sorrow.

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