Questions:
1. Is there enough flow between pgs1/2?
2. Should I emphasize my focal points on each page with yellow watercolor?
3. Anything other thoughts for improvement would be appreciated!
Monday, October 26, 2015
Journal Project
My book is inspired by my job taking care of fish at the med center. I'm incorporating my observations about the fish I feed into a series of life lessons (sort of in the format of a kids story.) I have yet to add the text into the journal, though I have been writing down my thoughts each day.
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I think adding yellow to the focal points would help your drawings stand out for the background. And maybe for the 1/2 page add some fish kinda swimming from the 2nd to the 1st.
ReplyDeleteI agree pushing the focal point more would really help bring some identity to the pages. Also using more colors that pop out against the tea\coffee staining.
ReplyDeleteI think some thicker lines would really make things pop as well as the yellow
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